I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Aireen.
I like your drawing is cool and i like they way you yous full stop and capital letters.
I agree with Calais. You did a great job with your drawing! Next time, try reading your sentences out loud to see if you can make any of them shorter. Keep up your hard work with your writing Joe- I can see BIG improvements :)
This is a cool discriptive news paper and maybe next time you could check your sentences and make sure they make sence.Great job :D
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I like your drawing is cool and i like they way you yous full stop and capital letters.
I agree with Calais. You did a great job with your drawing! Next time, try reading your sentences out loud to see if you can make any of them shorter. Keep up your hard work with your writing Joe- I can see BIG improvements :)
This is a cool discriptive news paper and maybe next time you could check your sentences and make sure they make sence.
Great job :D
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